|
Post by Shadow on Aug 7, 2016 2:20:18 GMT
Steam ID:
0:1:79386697
Steam Name:
Shadow1210
How long have you played with us?:
14h 31m 45s
What is your experience with serious roleplay?:
very little
Your Age?:
14
.5
Character name(s):
Shadow
Why do you wish to have a Spartan character?:
To complete his family legacy.
[IC SECTION]
Character Name:
Shadow
Character Description:
Blue green eyes|6'11|210lb|
Original Branch:
What is this character's backstory?:
Born on planet Reach, on the year 2550. New Alexandria was Shadow's home town, before being escorted to Earth after the Fall of Reach. Father was know to be MIA alot Thanksto his Spartan career. Covenant forces killed Shadow's Mother. When Shadow was growning up he went to his frist school he got kicked out for getting in many fights at school. So he went to just boot camp for his child hood. When Shadow was 20 he join UNSC
What action made your character considered for the Spartan Program?:
To do what his father did best. Beside being MIA
Describe a scenario in which you assault an entrenched position:
I would move into the entrenched positon and kill all of the targets one by one
Describe a situation where you combat a Brute in hand to hand combat:
i would move in and hit at it's weak spots for a fast kill on the brute
|
|
|
Post by Spartan 970 Field Marshal 'Mil on Aug 7, 2016 14:12:54 GMT
Denied. Sorry Shadow, but it's just not a good app.
"Describe a scenario in which you assault an entrenched position:
I would move into the entrenched positon and kill all of the targets one by one
Describe a situation where you combat a Brute in hand to hand combat:
i would move in and hit at it's weak spots for a fast kill on the brute " Scenarios are shit, and not described or detailed at all
You mentioned your father being MIA, when it's not the correct term. Him being missing in your life isn't MIA. MIA is if he's been kidnapped by covenant or some shit in the Military.
Also you say you're twenty but you're two. "I was born in 2550" it's 2552..
Descriptions not the best, but can be maybe overlooked.
You don't really have a good reason for wanting in
It's just not a good app. Sorry lad. Apply again when Wave Two comes round unless you can make a new app in a google docs and have it be way better.
|
|